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Brother's Keeper

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Oh how very delightful, Aphari! Secretly she was just jealous of Gar's clothes and she just couldn't face the truth that he looks way more fab than her.
But hey, at least Gar was nice about being spat on, I know that I wouldn't be. Bleck >:I
And you can interpret for yourselves whether Aphari looks apologetic or awkward, my guess is somewhere half way xD

Don't even ask me how Fenix managed to make the apple fly that far, my art failed me in my attempt to make it look like he was trying to cut it at an awkward angle and with a little too much force.

Art/Aphari (c) =Zolarise
Gar (c) *knux33
Fenix/Calcifer (c) ~StarMonyII

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:iconyellowcar96:
yellowcar96 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol he's really polite and calm. :3 love Aphari's costume it's awesome.
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Gar is such a sweetheart <3 Thank you!
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Canis-ferox Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha I love their interaction~ Good thing for her, Gar is polite. Oh I don't know if I mentioned this before, but I love Aphari's outfit :D
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha why it course, otherwise their relationship wouldn't be half as beautiful xD
Thank you so much ;;
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BloomingPinkIris Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good page :)
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks <3
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Nothofagus-obliqua Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
food fight should be imminent :'D Aphari is not amused at all!
pff, at least Gar took it very well :')
amazing, work, once again!
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Ahah, there will be food spat everywhere! :dummy:
Like the gentleman he is <3
Thank you!
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shadow-roamer56 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
XD Poor Aphari trying so hard...
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Her efforts just aren't appreciated by some people ;;
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Moongaze14 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Gar is really a gentleman. Food fight averted thanks to his good manners. Poor Aphari gets an apple in the back of the head and then ends up spitting on the person who is helping her in the banquet. The poor gal seems to be an accident magnet.
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
xD Indeed, what a lovely guy <3
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knux33 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Calcifer. BUT APPLES RUIN EVERYTHING. JUST ASK EVE.

/has a quiet moment of mourning for Gar's fab outfit, now forever stained by chicken grease and wolf spit.
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Eve: IKR? GOD DAMN THEM.

I cried a little when I drew that heartbroken face ;;
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StarMonyII Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Life is hard when you don't have any thumbs Fenix. c:
I really like your comic btw. :3
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Such are the tragedies of being that adorable <3
Thank you! ;;
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Lunaterasu Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
I keep faving your pages. XD
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm not complaining :"D
Thank you! <3
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Squidni Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pfft

fucking lol
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Apples, who knew they could be such menaces to dinner parties?
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Evelyn-Cross Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How do you get these pages up so fast comrade? :XD:

Well, regardless, great page :thumbsup:, my only nitpick is that Fenix's colors looks too pale.
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I'll be honest, I neglect my homework and have no social life xD;;

Thanks! I've got to go back and edit these pages when I finish so I'll probably change those colours and add in Fenix's bandaged hand god darn my forgetfulness ._.
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Evelyn-Cross Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aha, I know the feeling pfffft.

Oh yes, I forgot about that lol. XD Well, sounds good then! Can't wait to see the awesome edits~
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Imaginer-Fox Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice! .3.

I see apples are a favorite food now a days TuT
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
xD Fenix literally loves apples like nothing else, hence a plate full of sliced apple, apple pie and surprise surprise apple!
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Imaginer-Fox Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X3
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Stormdog66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooooo....food fight-BRING IT ON! *throws a pie*
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
xD somehow I don't see Aphari faring well in a food fight, she would get too angry pfft.
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Noxivaga Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol worst luck at a dinner party i've ever seen XD

wonderful work!
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
That apple had a plan all along >w>

Thank you Dajh! <3
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Noxivaga Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Kind of like how inanimate things jump out of your notebook at school |D
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StoryRPArt Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor little Gar...D'awwwww he's so sweetly adorable omg he's so cute~ xP
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Eep that little polite floof ball of alfjlskj <3
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StoryRPArt Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR!? idwafkh <3
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That sort of thing works better if you hold the apple with one hand and the knife with the other, silly Fenix. At least Gar is a gentleman about getting his clothes dirty, as always.

This page is cute, but the last few panels are a touch confusing because the viewpoint changes so abruptly from where we see Aphari being slammed on the head to where we see the meat flying out of her mouth. Initially I assumed she had turned her head around, it took me several reads to realize that we where seeing her from two different directions.

This is a principle called the "180-degree rule" in film making, but it applies to comics as well. The best way to think of it is that the panel is the lens of a camera watching the characters. Because of the spatial relations if you film them from one side, then switch the camera to film them from the opposite side, the characters appear to have swapped places. (Example -> [link] )

This is disorienting for the viewer and in general you want to avoid it if at all possible. When switching perspective like this you want a few panels panning over so the transition is less jarring and the audience understands what's going on.
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Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
True that xD

I thought it looked a little odd ouo;
Thank you for the advice though, my angles are definitely something I want to improve on in comic making, so I'm really grateful for the critique *saves le image* <3
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, happy to help. ^^
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AngieWilson Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* y'know what's* lol sorry forgot the space X)
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AngieWilson Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Y'knowwhat's funny? I understood it all on my first read XD But that's just me ;)
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There will always be exceptions, but I was speaking in the general. I only offered my opinion.

I know you probably didn't mean to, but in general replying in a contradictory fashion to a critique left for someone else is considered rude. It undermines the critique and makes the person leaving it feel antagonized when they are only trying to help the artist improve. You are entitled to your opinion, I am entitled to mine, and Zolarise can decide for herself how to respond to my critique.
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AngieWilson Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Meh. You left your opinion and I left mine. And whatever. Yours could be considered rude as well since Zolarise never asked specifically for critiques.. but that of course depends on them.

As for your 'reply' you, too, were rude and 'if' you want 'just as rude' as you 'assumed' mine to be. So 'pardon me' if I attack right back. As I was expecting either no reply or possibly a general friendly reply back (like saying 'true' for example.
'undermine'? LOL! Now that's looking way too deep. And the fact you said that makes me laugh. Sorry.

Like to 'argue' this more? Then Dare, pray tell... and be 'brave' enough to give me a NOTE to continue this pointless argument you started. Feel like 'I started' this? Well, then, _bring on the Notes! =3

Personally, I find replies to other peoples opinions laughable and pointless and literally when I dare people to note me to continue they Pussy-foot out and try to keep commenting on the picture itself rather than 'call my bluff' as it were. <-- true fact there! X)
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well, I shall. Only give me a moment to compose.
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AngieWilson Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds good. Btw, I must say Thank you for doing so! I'm highly impressed indeed! =3
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46Kibahime Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I sense a food fight...
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
And a wondrous food fight it would be!
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46Kibahime Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Indeed!
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FireballStardraco Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
Ouch, having an apple fly at you does hurt XD, and great work with this, I just love where this is going.
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
No denying that xD
Thanks! <3
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Alana-Fox Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
the bat looks cute and just love the headband thingy aphari is waering.
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:iconzolarise:
Zolarise Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Hehe Gar can't help his adorableness sometimes <3
Thank you!
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