Cover TYPE 1

I really really REALLY hate this.
It took me 15 hours + and all of that for nothing ;;
I don't know what it is, maybe its the scruffiness and the boring title or the poses or maybe the colouring types but I just despise this :c
If you're wondering "If she hates this so much, why did she post it?"
My answer: I want to hear your opinions about this, I've already got another idea up my sleeve which I'm sketching out right now, but I was also thinking that this is way too complicated for a comic cover. I mean, I've seen so many other comics around with perhaps just the main character's face, or a small landscape with the main protagonists in it but mine just looks messy and wrong >n>

I'd happily accept some constructive pointers that could help me out here? Otherwise wait until I finish and post type 2 of this.

Eeh I don't know, do what you want ouo;

Art/Song of the Beta/Characters (c) ~Zolarise